First shot at a zombie deck

[chimu.]

Hey, I've just started building a zombie deck with 2 zombie world structure decks I bought and some odd cards that I got my hands on. At this current stage I feel like there's something missing in the deck but I can't really put my finger on it. Would be awesome if someone could take a look at it and perhaps help me out, I'm quite new to yugioh so I haven't figured out how to build my decks yet. :|

The deck:

MONSTERS 21
Red Eyes Zombie Dragon 2
Ryu Kokki 2
Malevolent Mech 2
Paladin of the Cursed Dragon 3
Zombie Master 3
Getsu Fuma 2
Pyramid Turtle 3
Des Lacooda 2
Spirit Reaper 1
Sangan 1

SPELLS 12
Zombie World 2
Book of Life 2
Shrink 3
Terraforming 2
Mystical Space Typhoon 1
Lightening Vortex 1
Creature Swap 1

TRAPS 7
Waboku 3
Bottomless Trap Hole 2
Dust Tornado 1
Call of the Haunted 1

feel free to shred it to pieces,
chimu.

[Clipboard4]

I would suggest using a light zombie deck, try
-2 Zombie dragon
-2 getsufuma
+3 honest
+1 malevolent mech
-2 des lacooda
+2 creature swap
-1 dust
+1 zombie world

[Morphing Jar]

Swap one of those terraformings for a Field Barrier.

[chimu.]

Hmm, interesting idea Clipboard. I'll see if I can manage get my hands on a couple of Honest.
More ideas for the deck would be appreciated. :)

[Skurvnik]

Horrible. Just horrible. Throw it away or burn it ritually, either is fine.

[Strue]

NOT AS GOOD AS CHARIZARD

[Skurvnik]

Originally Posted by Strue

NOT AS GOOD AS CHARIZARD

QFT

[ancient gear soldier]

I would seriously consider adding a Call of the Mummy, good if all else fails, maybe another zombie world too

[chimu.]

Thanks for all the tips! :)
To be honest I totally overlooked Call of the Mummy thinking it was a quite worthless card, after taking another look I found that it might indeed be viable for a good deck. Started working on a new spin on my zombie deck, I'll post it when I figure out which cards to use. :)

EDIT(02:42 AM):

So I've spent about half an hour coming up with a new deck, this one has a burn touch added to it. However it's nowhere near complete and some help finishing it would be awesome. The cards with ? are cards that I'm currently unsure if I should add and how many of them I should add.

MONSTERS
Dark Dust Spirit ?
Pyramid Turtle 3
Zombie Master 3
Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower ?
Spirit Reaper 1
Paladin of the Cursed Dragon 3
Red Eyes Zombie Dragon 2
Il Blud ?
Fire Trooper ?
Cannon Soldier ?


SPELLS
Call of the Mummy 2
Zombie World 3
Terraforming 1
Mystical Space Typhoon 1
Lightning Vortex 1
Creature Swap ?
Everliving Underworld Cannon ?
Dark Room of Nightmare ?
Reinforcement of the Army 1
Swords of Revealing Light 1

TRAPS
Call of the Haunted 1
Bottomless Trap Hole 2
Trap of the Imperial Tomb ?
Ultimate Offering ?
Dark Bribe ?
Ceasefire 1
Waboku ?


chimu.

[Kierinn]

Eh. I personally find Call of the Mummy horrible. It's wayyy too situational, and pretty much only good if you're lucky enough to get it at the start of the duel. I can't help you with your burn zombie deck, as I have no experience with it, but I can help you with your first one.
Some problems at first glance-
Doesn't have ANY of the current meta zombie cards.
No Mezuki?
No Plaguespreader?
No DAD?

Be aware that some of these cards can get pretty expensive.



MONSTERS
3 x Pyramid Turtle
2 x Goblin Zombie
3 x Zombie Master
2 x Mezuki
2 x Shutendoji
1 x Red Eyes Zombie Dragon
1 x Paladin of the Cursed Dragon
1 x Plaguespreader Zombie
1 x Il Blud
1 x Dark Armed Dragon
1 x Spirit Reaper
2 x Malevolent

SPELLS
3 x Zombie World
1 x Terraforming
3 x Book of Life
1 x Mystical Space Typhoon
2 x Allure of Darkness
1 x Brain Control
1 x Lightning Vortex
1 x Heavy Storm
2 x Burial from the Different Dimension

TRAPS
2 x Bottomless Trap Hole
1 x Call of the Haunted
1 x Mirror Force
1 x Solemn Judgment
1 x Torrential Tribute

[chimu.]

Yeah, I'm working on getting my hands on some of the meta cards, and as you said they get quite expensive rather fast so things are progressing slowly atm. :P